Friday, January 8, 2010
Knuckling down to REVISIONS
Chapter one was easy enough. Just a tweak here and there, some more descriptions of Tempest and Jude and their reactions to each other.
Chapter two was another kettle of fish. Lots of what I had there just didn't work. I took my editor's advice and rewrote the entire thing from Jude's point of view, and am amazed at the change. He's gone from stoic to alpha, from quiet to dangerous. He's sending little shivers up my spine, and Tempest is seeing him in a completely new light.
I'm going with the flow, starting into chapter three and hoping that he knows what he's doing. I'll keep you posted!
Posted by Sally Clements at 3:48 PM