tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7360415678085099765.post1498849501326927452..comments2023-09-18T14:50:29.609+01:00Comments on Love and Chocolate: Writing VoiceSally Clementshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00126442284080778860noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7360415678085099765.post-47871557567501469112011-08-18T22:03:51.510+01:002011-08-18T22:03:51.510+01:00That's exactly it, Suzanne! Perfect example! T...That's exactly it, Suzanne! Perfect example! Thanks for popping by with it.Sally Clementshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00126442284080778860noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7360415678085099765.post-22897009303428218192011-08-18T03:59:27.513+01:002011-08-18T03:59:27.513+01:00Hi Sally,
I couldn't agree more that if in the...Hi Sally,<br />I couldn't agree more that if in the hero's pov the narrative should reflect his personality. I wrote recently, from memory. lol... And her fragrance was like a summer shower after a long, hot day, the scent billowing from a tarmac. The hero is a pilot, so he speaks in terms relating to what he knows.Suzanne Brandyn Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16969670520269001723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7360415678085099765.post-71478944415112028462011-08-18T01:49:15.321+01:002011-08-18T01:49:15.321+01:00Hi Jackie! I find reading it aloud the most amazin...Hi Jackie! I find reading it aloud the most amazing tool for improving a story - it's pretty exhausting, but much more effective than you'd imagine! I agree, its much easier to write if you're right there in your character's head. xxSally Clementshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00126442284080778860noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7360415678085099765.post-47671187163953995102011-08-17T22:25:00.057+01:002011-08-17T22:25:00.057+01:00Sally, I think I'm a bit the same. I don't...Sally, I think I'm a bit the same. I don't read it aloud (possibly I should)but I do try and think my way into the character. It's like getting into character for an actor maybe. And I find that if I'm not fully in their heads, the writing is really hard.Jackie Ashendenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15564893115525415518noreply@blogger.com